ISSUE-24 (rewriting): need to change general language, rewrite intro sections? [Group Note 1 -- General] from eGovernment Interest Group Issue Tracker on 2009-04-20 (public-egov-ig@w3.org from April 2009)

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ISSUE-24 (rewriting): need to change general language, rewrite intro sections? [Group Note 1 -- General]

http://www.w3.org/2007/eGov/IG/track/issues/24

Raised by: José Manuel Alonso
On product: Group Note 1 -- General

Raising this one on behalf of Anna Zhuang. She mentions that she doesn't think the language this document is using is the right one for a guideline produced by a standardization body and also suggests several things to be changed, specially in the introductory sections. See first email attached to this issue.

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