Re: [dxwg] Substituted introduction from github discussion #417

"it is silent" really means "there is no mention of", surely?

On Mon, 8 Oct 2018, 04:51 Nicholas Car, <notifications@github.com> wrote:

> *@nicholascar* requested changes on this pull request.
>
> Agree: that "outline of the margin of some thing" is verbose (tautological
> though, not oxymoronic!) so could just read "outline of something".
>
> Minor functional edit: [vocab-dcat-2] must be changed to [[vocab-dcat-2]]
>
> Minor grammatical edit: "...as means of accessing data. It is silent on
> whether a distribution should be in a particular serialization, or set of
> serializations." --> "...as means of accessing data; it is silent on
> whether a distribution should be in a particular serialization, or set of
> serializations.".
>
> Minor functional edit: "...SKOS concept, it does not specify a particular
> SKOS [skos-reference] concept scheme..." should be "...SKOS
> [[skos-reference]] concept, it does not specify a particular SKOS concept
> scheme..." i.e. moving SKOS ref to first mention and also using double [[,
> ]] for ReSpec.
>
> Minor grammar: "Other vocabularies such as Dublin Core Terms [DCTERMS]
> are..." --> "Other vocabularies, such as Dublin Core Terms [DCTERMS],
> are..."
>
> Please just take these minor points as OK and I'll include fixes for them
> in a follow-on PR in the next few hours.
> Minor functional edit: [DCTERMS] --> [[DCTERMS]]
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