- From: Phil Archer <phila@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 14 Apr 2016 20:53:33 +0100
- To: Public DWBP WG <public-dwbp-wg@w3.org>, Caroline Burle <cburle@nic.br>, Bernadette Farias Lóscio <bfl@cin.ufpe.br>, Newton Calegari <newton@nic.br>
Sorry I haven't done more but I have found this a lengthy task. After doing some initial mechanical staff-contacty-type changes described earlier (and merging those), I began the native speaker review. In doing so, I quickly found that I wanted to make more substantive changes, which I mustn't do - that's for the editors to consider, supported by the WG. So, I've been: 1. making straightforward "this is how a native speaker would say that" changes. You can see them all by consulting the diff at [1] onwards. 2. Making separate notes about the changes I *would* make or at least suggest. I will do my best to make further progress before tomorrow's call but for now, I can go no further. It's been a loonnnng day. Phil [1] http://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=http%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdwbp%2Fbp.html&doc2=http%3A%2F%2Fphilarcher1.github.io%2Fdwbp%2Fbp.html#dataFormats -- Phil Archer W3C Data Activity Lead http://www.w3.org/2013/data/ http://philarcher.org +44 (0)7887 767755 @philarcher1
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