Re: Feedback on current editor draft of BPs

Hi Christophe,

Thanks again for your comments!

We're gonna be able to make almost all the changes that you suggested. For
some others, I have comments and suggestions. Could you please take a look
and tell me if you agree with them? I'd like to kindly ask you a feedback
about this as soon as possible. These are the last changes that have to be
made on the document before we have the call with  the director at the
beginning of the next week.

My comments on your commits are listed below.

1509848
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/1509848f1ecd212ee3fcc9e1211a123b96f56bb0> I
think this edition changes the semantics of the question. The BP should
deal with something that is unique to the Web. I suggest to not change this
sentence.

9873c6b
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/9873c6bb8f602a977729ad993614840bf0bf81a2> I
think we should leave dct:publisher because this can also be seen as a
descriptive metadata, no?
I agree with including dct:language.

bf13401
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/bf134013217aaab698a257e814d53fb896b38dfb>
My
suggestion:
Examples of the application of some Best Practices are shown using Turtle
[[Turtle]] or JSON-LD [[JSON-LD]]

0f5f29a
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/0f5f29af971b9ae241d1e5a3382787a4a281bb12>
The
idea in this case is that a machine can find the data license, but the data
license itself doesn't need to be processable.

db17381
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/db17381dfa68740960d5ee75985181a551ca4694> I
think it is ok to leave axiom. There is also a reference to OWL2, so more
details can be found there.

7374375
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/737437595ec6177ffe656e8e41c611326470e763> I
think if we change the first sentence to remove the reference to sensitive
data, then it becomes more generic and solves the problem.

0c313df
<https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/0c313df66691323f9f81e44fc3ac256cf96ee887> I
think so. However, I think this update requires a major change on the BP. I
suggest to leave the way it is.


cheers,
Bernadette



2016-11-28 10:38 GMT-03:00 Christophe Guéret <christophe.gueret@gmail.com>:

> Hi Bernadette,
>
> Thanks for considering all the comments :-)
> As you saw I just commented further (at the bottom) on your comment "
> e70fc2c
> <https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/e70fc2cba67d453b7e6d163cffb68a14bf83cb5a> I
> used the http://www.geonames.org/3399415 and it worked. Is it really
> necessary to change?"because I think that the change is indeed needed to
> get working LD links.
>
> Regarding "c7496c2
> <https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/commit/c7496c219747b2138ccb7d1570a1880cb210de51> The
> example shows the inclusion of the locale parameters metadata, followed by
> a locale-neutral representation of bus fare data. The example has to parts:
> one that shows that metadata and the other one to show an example of
> representation. I suggest to leave it like this." I understand these are
> two different parts but still think it's confusing to see them together.
> Maybe you could just split that code into two <pre> ?
>
> Best Regards,
> Christophe
>
> On 28 November 2016 at 12:41, Bernadette Farias Lóscio <bfl@cin.ufpe.br>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi Christophe,
>>
>> Thanks a lot for your detailed review! I checked each one of the commits
>> and most of them are editorial changes and can easily be incorporated on
>> the document.
>>
>> I'd like to kindly ask you to take a look on comments that I included on
>> the pull request [1] and please let me know if you are ok with them.
>>
>> kind regards,
>> Bernadette
>>
>> [1] https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/pull/474
>>
>> 2016-10-06 19:46 GMT-03:00 Christophe Guéret <christophe.gueret@gmail.com
>> >:
>>
>>> Dear everyone,
>>>
>>> Congrats on all the great work :-)
>>>
>>> I have (finally !) been through the latest draft of the best practices
>>> and made a number of comments which I just proposed with a pull request (
>>> https://github.com/w3c/dwbp/pull/474). Hope you will find those useful.
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>> Christophe
>>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Bernadette Farias Lóscio
>> Centro de Informática
>> Universidade Federal de Pernambuco - UFPE, Brazil
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