Daniel,
I went ahead and made some modifications in that paragraph (see also the diff file).
Is that ok now?
Ivan
> On 26 Apr 2017, at 11:13, Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org> wrote:
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>> On 26 Apr 2017, at 10:24, Daniel Glazman <daniel.glazman@disruptive-innovations.com> wrote:
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>> Le 25/04/2017 à 12:43, Ivan Herman a écrit :
>>> Daniel,
>>>
>>> I have just made an update to the proposed charter text (still in the separate branch[1]):
>>>
>>> - separated the rec-track and non-rec-track documents in the list of input documents
>>> - I have also added a reference to HTML, CSS, and SVG in the list of input documents with some general text on why those documents appear there
>>>
>>> Are these o.k. with you?
>>
>> Sorry for the delay, I had too much on my radar yesterday to
>> review your changes.
>>
>> Your changes are fine by me with one exception, that I spent a lot
>> time thinking about: I still think the two last sentences of the last
>> paragraph of the Scope section, starting with "EPUB 4 must not..."
>> should be dropped or modified enough to be a recommended option and not
>> an enforcement any more. This is something to be decided by the WG and
>> such a technical choice should not be enforced by the Charter. To be
>> more precise, I can't accept the too strong "must not" and "must be
>> a type".
>>
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> Keep the sentence with s/must/should/? Would that work?
>
> Ivan
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>> With a compromise there, I would withdraw my formal objection.
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>> Hth.
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>> </Daniel>
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