> On 26 Apr 2017, at 10:24, Daniel Glazman <daniel.glazman@disruptive-innovations.com> wrote:
>
> Le 25/04/2017 à 12:43, Ivan Herman a écrit :
>> Daniel,
>>
>> I have just made an update to the proposed charter text (still in the separate branch[1]):
>>
>> - separated the rec-track and non-rec-track documents in the list of input documents
>> - I have also added a reference to HTML, CSS, and SVG in the list of input documents with some general text on why those documents appear there
>>
>> Are these o.k. with you?
>
> Sorry for the delay, I had too much on my radar yesterday to
> review your changes.
>
> Your changes are fine by me with one exception, that I spent a lot
> time thinking about: I still think the two last sentences of the last
> paragraph of the Scope section, starting with "EPUB 4 must not..."
> should be dropped or modified enough to be a recommended option and not
> an enforcement any more. This is something to be decided by the WG and
> such a technical choice should not be enforced by the Charter. To be
> more precise, I can't accept the too strong "must not" and "must be
> a type".
>
Keep the sentence with s/must/should/? Would that work?
Ivan
> With a compromise there, I would withdraw my formal objection.
>
> Hth.
>
> </Daniel>
>
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