Re: Reviewing the Charter

> Please also note that we are currently working on revising the charter before year end, see this message from Dom
> https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-device-apis/2015Jun/0149.html

@dom:
> Some of these deliverables might, upon the request of the Working Group, may be moved to the proposed Timed Media Working Group.

"might...may" -- drop the `may`...

> An API to to obtain data from the accelerometer sensor, built on the generic sensor API

"to to" -- drop one

> The Working Group may also document in a Working Group Note the useful design patterns shared by the APIs it is developing.

`the useful` => `useful`

> Requirements and use case documents for specifications.

drop `.`

> This Working Group expects to maintain contacts with at least the following groups and Activities within W3C (in alphabetical order):

I didn't see any Activities -- there is one (WAI),

> Web Accessibility Initiative Protocols and Formats Working Group

for a11y reasons, it would be helpful if there were a conjunction
between these two links -- I suggest "and"

> This group provides use cases and requirements for using Web technologies on TV and thus important input on some of the APIs developed by the Device and Sensors Working Group

missing period

> The Device and Sensors Working Group collaborate with the WebRTC Working Group on many media-related APIs

`collaborates` and missing period

> Copyright© 2011 W3C® (MIT, ERCIM, Keio), All Rights Reserved.

you're missing one, and the year should change :)

> There is also a pull request regarding licensing
>
> https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-device-apis/2015Jul/0003.html

I don't object

> Thanks for looking at the charter in detail! Your thoughts on the revised charter and potential licensing would be welcome.

Received on Monday, 26 October 2015 14:03:07 UTC