RE: ISSUE-164: Correct default for charging time if unknown in battery (was: [battery] next steps and questions)

> From: ext Kostiainen, Anssi [mailto:anssi.kostiainen@intel.com]
>
> On 02 Jul 2014, at 00:43, <cathy.chan@nokia.com> <cathy.chan@nokia.com>
> wrote:
> 
> > Yep, that takes care of the inconsistency, which was my major concern.
> >
> > Can we consolidate those into one paragraph, or is there some subtlety
> that I'm missing? Each time I read through that part of the spec, I found
> myself trying to figure out what the second paragraph is telling me that the
> first wasn't.
> 
> The text above the IDL reads more like an introduction, while the text below
> contains the normative assertions.
> 
> To clarify this, I moved the introductory-ish text that contains no normative
> assertions to the Introduction section, 

Personally I think it flows better when that paragraph is in the BatteryManager Interface section.

> and made the other half of the text
> talking about the defaults a note that I placed below the normative text
> introducing the concept:
> 

This is perfect! Thanks Anssi!

Regards, Cathy.


> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/dap/rev/3ab4af97cf9e
> 
> Please let us know if this addresses your concern, or whether we should
> revert back to the previous. To ease the review, here are the updated
> sections:
> 
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/dap/raw-
> file/default/battery/Overview.html#introduction
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/dap/raw-file/default/battery/Overview.html#the-
> batterymanager-interface
> 
> > Also, with this latest edit, I think we can also s/the implementation is
> unable to report the remaining charging time while the battery is charging
> but not full/the implementation is unable to report the remaining charging
> time/ in the description of the chargingTime. That extra phrase ("while the
> battery is charging but not full") was added to address my previous feedback,
> but I think we don't need it anymore. Mounir, WDYT?
> 
> Dropped "while the battery is charging but not full":
> 
> https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/dap/rev/eb02dc5983af
> 
> Mounir - feel free to revert or make further clarification as needed.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> -Anssi

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