- From: Anssi Kostiainen <anssi.kostiainen@nokia.com>
- Date: Thu, 10 Nov 2011 14:09:39 +0200
- To: ext Justin Lebar <jlebar@mozilla.com>
- Cc: Jonas Sicking <jonas@sicking.cc>, DAP WG <public-device-apis@w3.org>, public-device-status@w3.org
Hi Justin, On 9.11.2011, at 21.39, ext Justin Lebar wrote: > I have a few more comments; mostly nits. > >> "If pattern is 0, an empty list, null or undefined" > > Nit: "null, or undefined", unless the W3C has a rule against the > Oxford comma [1]. Fixed -- it's just my Finnish shining through :) >> If pattern is a list, proceed to the next step, otherwise run the following substeps: > > Nit: This is a comma splice, the second comma should be a semicolon or > a period. Fixed. >> For each entry in pattern, run the following substeps: If entry exceeds an implementation dependent limit, the user agent may throw a NotSupportedError exception and abort these steps. > > Nit: s/implementation dependent/implementation-dependent Fixed. > Nit: You could write this without a loop, as: > > "If any element of pattern exceeds an implementation-dependent limit..." Changed to: [[ If any entry of pattern exceeds an implementation-dependent limit, then the user agent may throw a NotSupportedError exception and abort these steps. ]] >> If the length of pattern is greater than 1 and divides by 2 leaving no remainder > > Use "even" here, please. Changed to: [[ If the length of pattern is even, then remove the last entry in pattern. ]] >> Otherwise pause [HTML5] for a period of time milliseconds. > > Nit: "pause for |time| milliseconds." (You "Pause for a period of > time," but you "pause for 42 milliseconds.") Fixed. [...] Thanks! -Anssi
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