- From: Frederick Hirsch <Frederick.Hirsch@nokia.com>
- Date: Wed, 10 Mar 2010 09:37:43 -0500
- To: "Hirsch Frederick (Nokia-CIC/Boston)" <Frederick.Hirsch@nokia.com>
- Cc: ext Dominique Hazael-Massieux <dom@w3.org>, Alissa Cooper <acooper@cdt.org>, W3C Device APIs and Policy WG <public-device-apis@w3.org>
Alissa, Dom I think these changes are good, I especially like the fact that questions about approach, APIs etc are now framed as issues rather than in the text. The additional granularity of the discussion is also helpful. Thanks for moving this forward. regards, Frederick Frederick Hirsch Nokia On Mar 10, 2010, at 9:24 AM, Hirsch Frederick (Nokia-CIC/Boston) wrote: > Thanks Alissa for the revision and Dom for the document update (though > I sometimes wonder if we should first agree changes before > incorporating): > > Editorial comment: > > For readability, I suggest we change T* to a string wherever it s > referenced: > > T1 to "UA-Functionality" > T2 to "APP-Policy" > T3 to "User-Policy" > T4 to "Data-Use" > > I for one, cannot remember what "T4" is supposed to mean when reading. > > Thus > "T2: " is changed to "UA-Functionality:" ... > > This makes for a more meaningful read with little bloat. I suggest we > can use <code> markup for these terms... > > > Similarly suggest changing > > PI1 to "Device-Independent-Policy > Pl2 to "Portable-User-Settings" > Pl3 to "Policy Provisioning" > > although currently the Pl* items are not referenced. > > regards, Frederick > > Frederick Hirsch > Nokia > > > > On Mar 10, 2010, at 5:54 AM, ext Dominique Hazael-Massieux wrote: > >> Le mardi 09 mars 2010 à 18:11 +0000, Alissa Cooper a écrit : >>> Per the above action, please find below the suggested text for the >>> privacy considerations section of the policy requirements. I more or >>> less rolled together what was already in the spec with my email from >>> last week, http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-device-apis/2010Mar/0027.html >>> , with minor clarifying edits. Although I left the mark-up in so it >>> can more easily be inserted into the doc, I think it's pretty >>> readable. >> >> Thanks Alissa, I've incorporated your text in the document itself >> where >> it will be even more readable: >> http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/policy-reqs/#privacy-considerations >> >> Dom >> >> >> >
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