Re: shapes-ISSUE-201 (node target): how does node target specify targets for a shape? [SHACL Spec]

I have applied this edit (and variations of it in the other places):

https://github.com/w3c/data-shapes/commit/4458a8a7b6265e8dd1660cb0666a95e2eb5761db

The main difference is that it clarifies what the shape is. As such I 
think it could be declared as [Editorial].

In today's response [1] Peter has already acknowledged my previous edits 
so that I believe his issue should be addressed now.

Thanks,
Holger

[1] https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-rdf-shapes/2016Nov/0017.html


On 18/11/2016 10:36, Irene Polikoff wrote:
> I would switch 'define' and 'specify' and change the language slightly:
>
> "A node target is specified using the sh:targetNode predicate. A value 
> of sh:targetNode can be an IRI or a literal. Each value of a node 
> target identifies a node in the data graph to be validatedagainst a 
> shape that is the subject of the triple."
>
> On Thu, Nov 17, 2016 at 6:24 PM, RDF Data Shapes Working Group Issue 
> Tracker <sysbot+tracker@w3.org <mailto:sysbot+tracker@w3.org>> wrote:
>
>     shapes-ISSUE-201 (node target): how does node target specify
>     targets for a shape? [SHACL Spec]
>
>     http://www.w3.org/2014/data-shapes/track/issues/201
>     <http://www.w3.org/2014/data-shapes/track/issues/201>
>
>     Raised by: Karen Coyle
>     On product: SHACL Spec
>
>     >From email [1]
>
>     "A node target is defined with the sh:targetNode predicate. Each
>     value of
>     sh:targetNode can be an IRI or a literal. Each value of a node target
>     defines a node to validate in the data graph."   This doesn't say
>     how a node
>     target specifies targets for a shape.
>
>     "The following SPARQL query specifies the semantics of node
>     targets. The
>     variable targetNode is assumed to be pre-bound to the given value of
>     sh:targetNode."  This also doesn't say how a node target specifies
>     targets
>     for a shape.
>
>     "SPARQL DEFINITION
>     SELECT DISTINCT ?this    # ?this is the focus node
>     WHERE {
>             BIND ($targetNode AS ?this)    # $targetnote is pre-bound
>     to ex:Alice
>     }"  This also doesn't say how a node target specifies targets for
>     a shape.
>
>     [1]
>     https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-rdf-shapes/2016Nov/0000.html
>     <https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-rdf-shapes/2016Nov/0000.html>
>
>
>
>