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Re: Comments on draft #3

From: Karen Coyle <kcoyle@kcoyle.net>
Date: Mon, 23 Mar 2015 18:26:41 -0700
Message-ID: <5510BD51.1080108@kcoyle.net>
To: public-data-shapes-wg@w3.org

On 3/23/15 5:42 PM, Holger Knublauch wrote:
> On 3/24/15 4:18 AM, Karen Coyle wrote:
>> Holger, I do like those examples. They still need instance data.
> Instance data is present in "EXAMPLE 2: Sample Issue instances with
> resulting constraint violations" if you scroll a bit further down. Is
> this not clear enough?

I suggest using the form similar to that in the SPARQL 1.1 Query 
language document, which has separate boxes for data and queries -- 
except in the SHACL document it should be data, SHACL constraint, and 
results. However, I don't think we know exactly what format the results 
will take, so for now that can just be text explaining the expected 
result. I also think that sample data should be used, to the extent 
possible, for every example.

>> In spite of this, the first audience described by Arthur is still not
>> served in this draft. You may not have a strong idea of how the
>> document should address that audience; if that's the case, then
>> perhaps some others of us could draw up some content for that section.
>> It shouldn't all be on you, after all!
> I'd be happy to receive input and diffs on any aspect of the document.
> Much of my prose is very brief, as I thought would be best for a formal
> specification. While we can certainly make it more readable for
> beginners, I don't see this becoming a tutorial (if that's what you are
> referring to).

No, I am indeed referring to the #1 section of Arthur's "division by 
audience" email. Tutorials will still be useful, but that's not what is 
being suggested.


> Thanks,
> Holger

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