- From: Steven Rowat <steven_rowat@sunshine.net>
- Date: Sun, 31 Mar 2019 11:52:29 -0700
- To: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>, W3C Credentials CG <public-credentials@w3.org>
On 2019-03-31 11:20 am, Manu Sporny wrote: > Can we instead focus on providing very specific and concrete changes to > the suggested specification text? OK, I've had my say, and thanks for the considered response. Concrete changes: In the Abstract you presented, I believe an "of" is missing in: "DIDs that are managed through the use Distributed Ledger Technologies"; which I think should be: "DIDs that are managed through the use [of] Distributed Ledger Technologies". And in your original email, I believe "Editor's" was used twice to indicate a plural; which is not correct. "Editors" is the plural. Both nitpicky, but apparently that's what you want this time. ;-) Steven
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