Re: Comments - (was: Re: DID PR review deadline: October 24)

also,

What's the DIFF with
http://docs.oasis-open.org/xdi/xdi-core/v1.0/csd01/xdi-core-v1.0-csd01.xml
 ??



On Thu, 19 Oct 2017 at 21:19 Timothy Holborn <timothy.holborn@gmail.com>
wrote:

> I've changed the subjectLine.
>
> opinions outlined below.
>
> The WikiPedia links should be for the version referenced by the doc.
>
> ie:
> https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Federated_identity&oldid=800443727
> vs. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Federated_identity
>
> key-value pair
> <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Attribute%25E2%2580%2593value_pair> = bad
> link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Attribute%25E2%2580%2593value_pair
>
> re:
>
>    1. URN is the term for a specific type of URI intended to persistently
>    identify a resource, i.e., an identifier that will never change no matter
>    how often the resource moves, changes names, changes owners, etc. URNs are
>    intended to last forever.
>
> I looked up both https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Urn and
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uniform_Resource_Name noting the
> differences herein.  i later found https://tools.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2141.txt
> which should likely be hyperlinked to title.
>
> there's otherwise a bunch of broken links.  please check them all.
>
> this spec. looks like...
>
> well.  I hope the work from the group is documented in a modular way.
> Something about being able to use parts of the work, without having to eat
> it all...
>
> Tim.
>
>
> On Thu, 19 Oct 2017 at 20:59 Timothy Holborn <timothy.holborn@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Found a relevent IETF RFC[4] re: trust anchors[2]
>>
>> On Thu, 19 Oct 2017 at 18:09 Timothy Holborn <timothy.holborn@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> very quickly.  was looking at the overview[1] and saw the concept "root
>>> of trust <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trust_anchor>" which hyperlinks
>>> to Trust Anchor[2].  I suggest either defining a new wikipedia page for the
>>> term[3] rather than simply a redirect, or change the term used in the spec
>>> doc.
>>>
>>> more l8r.
>>>
>>> Tim.H.
>>>
>>> [1] https://w3c-ccg.github.io/did-spec/#overview
>>> [2] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trust_anchor
>>> [3]
>>> https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Root_of_Trust&action=history
>>>
>> [4] https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5914
>>
>>>
>>> On Thu, 19 Oct 2017 at 17:49 Timothy Holborn <timothy.holborn@gmail.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> On Thu, 19 Oct 2017 at 08:20 Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> On 10/18/2017 01:50 PM, Kim Hamilton Duffy wrote:
>>>>> > Manu -- what are your thoughts?
>>>>>
>>>>> Steven, at this point the only feedback we're looking for is only
>>>>> technical in nature and even then, based on whether the text reflects
>>>>> consensus at Rebooting the Web of Trust 5, which you weren't at.
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Is this a RWOT spec?
>>>>
>>>> If so, it should be marked as such.   This CG can then make one
>>>> inspired by it, if/as required.
>>>>
>>>> Therein, the spec should be moved to the RWOT repo?
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> In other words, the spec isn't ready for your kind of valuable feedback
>>>>> yet... it would largely be a waste of your time to correct the large
>>>>> swaths of the spec text that may be confusing for non-implementers that
>>>>> are buried in the details right now.
>>>>>
>>>>> I expect that we may need your review help in a few months time from
>>>>> now. As always, thanks for offering and we will certainly take you up
>>>>> on
>>>>> it once it becomes a good use of your time.
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>> I'll review and have a look; and am not sure of the specifics, whilst
>>>> noting important principles herein.
>>>>
>>>> IMHO: it's important to be inclusive and the W3 IPR framework is not
>>>> unintentionally misaligned in some way that is against the spirit of this
>>>> structure.
>>>>
>>>> I  guess.  try not to oversimplify imho.  might end-up with unintended
>>>> consequences. (technically speaking).
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> -- manu
>>>>>
>>>>> best wishes,
>>>>
>>>> tim.
>>>>
>>>>
>>> --
>>>>> Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny, G+: +Manu Sporny)
>>>>> Founder/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc.
>>>>> blog: Rebalancing How the Web is Built
>>>>> http://manu.sporny.org/2016/rebalancing/
>>>>>
>>>>>