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Text that is difficult to understand. Needs to be simplified and may be have an illustrative example.

From: <sylvie.duchateau@accessiweb.org>
Date: Mon, 02 Aug 2010 14:54:29 +0000
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Name: Sylvie Duchateau
Email: sylvie.duchateau@accessiweb.org
Affiliation: Association BrailleNet
Document: TD
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Part of Item: Applicability
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: Text that is difficult to understand. Needs to be simplified and may be have an illustrative example. 
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
Location : introduction of Techniques for WCAG 2.0 and Understanding WCAG 2.0, Heading h3 "sufficient techniques". 
paragraph added on July 2010 draft. 

"[Begin add] In some cases it's only when a combination 
of techniques are used that it is considered sufficient. In these cases, the sufficient combination of techniques are listed together on one numbered line

in the “How to Meet WCAG 2.0” and “Understanding WCAG 2.0” documents. Each numbered line is sufficient to meet the Success Criteria it addresses, but the

individual techniques on that line are not sufficient by themselves unless they are on a numbered line by themselves.[end add] 


Proposed Change:
Simplify this paragraph that does not sound clear at all. 
What does this "numbered line" wording mean? 
May be giving an example to illustrate what is meant would be helpful. 
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