- From: Catherine Brys <c.brys@lib.gla.ac.uk>
- Date: Mon, 10 Jan 2005 16:47:35 -0000
- To: "'public-comments-wcag20@w3.org'" <public-comments-wcag20@w3.org>
[based on comments relating to the July draft and submitted originally as an anonymous contributor on 23 Nov 04] Disclaimer: The comments below represent the personal opinion of the sender; they do not necessarily represent the University's viewpoint. oo WCAG Structure - I would find it useful if examples would be more clearly mapped to the corresponding guidelines. E.g.: .. Examples of Guideline 1.1. .. Example 1 of Guideline 1.2 - Navigation between the guidelines, techniques and checklists in version 1.0 was quite confusing. There were too many levels and links often didn't point to very specific information causing disorientation. Could this please be improved in version 2? Under Level 3 Success Criteria for Guideline 1.1, the link 'How to provide descriptions of all important visual information for multimedia' would be clearer if it would state explicitly that this links to a technique, e.g. 'Technique: How to provide descriptions of all important visual information for multimedia'. - Would a section at the start of the document to increase general awareness be useful? I know there are many other web pages on this available but maybe a separate paragraph at the beginning would add value and would avoid the need to give extensive background information with some examples. Dr. Catherine M. Brys Library Web Services Administrator - Library Web Site Accessibility and Usability Project - Glasgow University Library, Hillhead Street, Glasgow, G12 8QE, Scotland, UK e: c.brys [at] lib.gla.ac.uk t: +44 (0)141 330 6748 w: www.lib.gla.ac.uk/accessible
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