RE: last changes?

I am reading this as well and agree with Mike so is there anything else we need to do to tighten them up before they go off? 

 "Significant financial loss is devastating, with an individual's emotional wellbeing a primary casualty, and mental health also vulnerable."   to quote 

Bruhn, A. G. (2015). Personal and social impacts of significant financial loss. Australian Journal of Management, 40(3), 459-477.

Best wishes
E.A. 


From: Michael Pluke [Mike.Pluke@castle-consult.com]
Sent: 21 February 2017 17:57
To: lisa.seeman; Smith
Cc: public-cognitive-a11y-tf
Subject: RE: last changes?

Hi Lisa
 
Presumably your comment, which I agree with, refers to these definitions in general?

 
Jim’s use of brackets instead of commas in a few places doesn’t change the definitions, it just makes them easier to read. Your comment applies to the originally proposed
 definitions and Jim’s improved versions.
 
Best regards
 
Mike
PS There seems to be (at least) two different ways to refer to ,, () and []. In my (UK) understanding both the latter two are brackets (round and square) and that whether
 you use commas or brackets you are putting the text in between in parenthesis. It seems that in other (US?) understandings () are referred to as parentheses. Doing a quick Google search leads to much confusion on these namings! My UK-tuned brain had to read
 all of text behind 
MailScanner has detected a possible fraud attempt from "www.grammarbook.com" claiming to be GrammarBook.com’s statement “Parentheses and brackets must never be used interchangeably” to have any clue what they were on about!!
 
 
 





From: lisa.seeman [mailto:lisa.seeman@zoho.com]


Sent: 21 February 2017 16:00

To: Smith <smithjs@atos.net>

Cc: public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>

Subject: RE: last changes?


 


i think we need the definition to be more testable


such as what is a  significant financial loss



 



i guese it will be cleaner for the next verison


All the best



Lisa Seeman



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---- On Tue, 21 Feb 2017 17:10:11 +0200 Smith<smithjs@atos.net>
 wrote ---- 






Hi All,
 
How do these seem? Mostly the use of parenthesis to help with the “comma overload” plus an extension on the loss of rights and freedoms to cover people
 the user is acting on behalf of
 
Important information:
Information the user may need to complete any action or task (including offline tasks); or information related to safety, risk, privacy, health or
 opportunity.
 
Critical service:
A service that is needed to prevent  significant harm,  loss (such as significant financial loss), illness or injury to the user, a deterioration in
 the condition of a patient or the effective loss of rights or freedoms of the user or someone the user is acting on the behalf of.
 
Jim
 




From: lisa.seeman [mailto:lisa.seeman@zoho.com]


Sent: Tuesday, February 21, 2017 2:47 PM

To: public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>

Subject: last changes?


 


Hi folks
Can we tighten up the wording at all for the following
 
 

important information

information the user may need to complete any action or task including an offline task, or related to safety, risks, privacy, health or opportunities
 
critical service
service that is needed to prevent significant harm, risk or loss such as: significant financial loss, illness, injury or deterioration in a patient's
 condition or effective loss of rights or freedoms
 


All the best



Lisa Seeman



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Twitter

Received on Tuesday, 21 February 2017 18:13:50 UTC