- From: Katie Haritos-Shea <ryladog@gmail.com>
- Date: Thu, 10 Apr 2014 23:26:42 -0400
- To: Lisa Seeman <lisa.seeman@zoho.com>
- Cc: Mary Jo Mueller <maryjom@us.ibm.com>, public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>, Katie Haritos-Shea <ryladog@earthlink.net>
- Message-ID: <CAEy-OxEREKrsT-p_wLX+K9_HfsBbX6DU4NsXWZDpf=nTR=wU8Q@mail.gmail.com>
Thanks Lisa, I will be making the edits we discussed yesterday this weekend. All good suggestions. WAI AGE was leveraged and referenced in References. * katie * Katie Haritos-Shea @ GMAIL On Apr 10, 2014 6:22 PM, "lisa.seeman" <lisa.seeman@zoho.com> wrote: > > I gave Katie a review of the dementia subgroup work so far. > It is moving in the right direction. And my thanks to the team working on > it. > > However I forgot to mention that you need to reference sources - this is > meant to be in part a literary review. > > As a recap other points were: > > 1. The structure is hard to follow. Please fill out headings so they > make sense when read out of context - such as "Challenges - dementia" > 2. The section on aging is restricted to age related cognitive > decline and we are not addressing co-morbidity. (The name of the subgroup > seemed to have been shorted to drop the term "cognitive decline " but this > was not agreed by the group) > 3. I recommended identifying cognitive functions effected by dementia > and age related cognitive decline and then using that to build what are the > challenges and reference the challenges in the user stories. > 4. Challenges should focus on ICT. Also look at > http://www.scie.org.uk/publications/ictfordementia/ and > http://www.w3.org/WAI/WAI-AGE/and other related works. > 5. User stories should try to address the topics and methodologies in > https://www.w3.org/WAI/PF/cognitive-a11y-tf/wiki/Gap_Analysis/Introduction#Methodology_in_User_Research > 6. The section on "Characteristics of Content Optimized for Aging and > Dementia" needs to be redone. The content is not what is needed. It needs > to be what websites for people with cognitive decline related to aging and > dementia do. for example http://www.livingmadeeasy.org.uk/ > 7. For the section on guidelines, please reference or review > guidelines such as > http://dementiavoices.org.uk/wp-content/uploads/2013/11/DEEP-Guide-Creating-websites.pdfand not just WCAG > > Thanks again for all your hard work. > > All the best > > Lisa Seeman > > Athena ICT Accessibility Projects > LinkedIn, Twitter > > > >
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