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Re: ACTION-847: Change the Addendum according to the resolution about toning down the test character of the document

From: Manrique Lopez <manrique.lopez@fundacionctic.org>
Date: Thu, 09 Oct 2008 17:54:24 +0200
To: public-bpwg@w3.org
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Hello Kai,

Only one minor comment:
"The purpose of this document is to provide guidelines to content
producers on how to improve their content even beyond mobileOK Basic by
following the guidelines laid out in this document"

Does "mobileOK Basic" still exist? I would say "[...]even beyond
mobileOK Basic Tests by[...]"

And instead of "2 Test format", what about "2 Evaluation format"?

Best regards,

El jue, 02-10-2008 a las 15:15 +0200, Scheppe, Kai-Dietrich escribió:
> <<ED-mobileOK-pro10-tests-20080731.htm>>  
> I had been actioned to reduce the test like tone in this document
> somewhat.
> We had agreed that first I should just do a couple of examples that show
> what I am thinking of.
> In the this version of the document I have
> - modified the title
> - modified some introductory texts
> - modified the first two tests
> Please comment on whether this fits the bill
> -- Kai
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