- From: Manrique Lopez <manrique.lopez@fundacionctic.org>
- Date: Thu, 09 Oct 2008 17:54:24 +0200
- To: public-bpwg@w3.org
Hello Kai, Only one minor comment: "The purpose of this document is to provide guidelines to content producers on how to improve their content even beyond mobileOK Basic by following the guidelines laid out in this document" Does "mobileOK Basic" still exist? I would say "[...]even beyond mobileOK Basic Tests by[...]" And instead of "2 Test format", what about "2 Evaluation format"? Best regards, El jue, 02-10-2008 a las 15:15 +0200, Scheppe, Kai-Dietrich escribió: > <<ED-mobileOK-pro10-tests-20080731.htm>> > I had been actioned to reduce the test like tone in this document > somewhat. > > We had agreed that first I should just do a couple of examples that show > what I am thinking of. > > > In the this version of the document I have > > - modified the title > - modified some introductory texts > - modified the first two tests > > > Please comment on whether this fits the bill > > -- Kai -- José Manrique López de la Fuente <manrique.lopez@fundacionctic.org> Área de Tecnología Fundación CTIC Web: http://www.fundacionctic.org Tel: (+34) 984 29 12 12 Parque Científico Tecnológico de Gijón Edificio Centros Tecnológicos Cabueñes s/n 33203 GIJÓN - ASTURIAS - ESPAÑA #Antes de imprimir este e-mail piense bien si es necesario hacerlo: El medioambiente es cosa de todos.
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