Two specific comments

Hi,

 

I have a couple of specific comments:

 

2.1 Presentation Issues

"It is particularly important in the mobile context to help the user
create a mental image of the site. This can be assisted by adopting a
consistent style and can be considerably diminished by an uneven style."

Consistent style isn't the only way to achieve this - what about other
aspects such as logical navigation?

 

2.5 Advertising

"...For example, some mechanisms that are commonly used for presentation
of advertising material do not work well on small devices and are
therefore contrary to the Best Practice recommendations."

This sentence specifies "some mechanisms". Are these mechanisms listed
anywhere (not necessarily in the document)?

 

Cheers, 

 

Owen ONeill