Re: comments: Mobile Web Best Practices 1.0 Introduction - history sensitive

 Dear Karl Dubost ,

The Mobile Web Best Practice Working Group has reviewed the comments you
sent [1] on the Last Call Working Draft [2] of the Mobile Web Best
Practices 1.0 published on 12 Apr 2006 Thank you for having taken the time
to review the document and to send us comments!

This message holds the disposition of the said comments on which the
Working Group has agreed. This disposition has been implemented in the new
version of the document available at:
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-mobile-bp-20060518/

Please review it carefully and let us know if you agree with it or not
before 30 May 2006. In case of disagreement, you are requested to provide
a specific solution for or a path to a consensus with the Working Group.
If such a consensus cannot be achieved, you will be given the opportunity
to raise a formal objection which will then be reviewed by the Director
during the transition of this document to the next stage in the W3C
Recommendation Track.

Thanks,

For the Mobile Web Best Practice Working Group,
Philipp Hoschka
Dominique Hazaël-Massieux
W3C Staff Contacts

 1. http://www.w3.org/mid/A55E242F-315C-4245-A2E2-84D038F279E4@w3.org
 2. http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-mobile-bp-20060412/


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Your comment on 1.1 Purpose of the Document:
Hi,

This is a QA Review comment for "Mobile Web Best Practices 1.0"

http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-mobile-bp-20060412/#iddiv2220152400

Tue, 11 Apr 2006 12:18:21 GMT

Last Call WD





I wonder if this following part should be in the status section. The  

sentence will not bear the same meaning once you would have actually  

published the companion documents. Or maybe you could modify the  

sentence in a way that will not imply a future: "will be".





[[[

mobileOK and techniques for implementing the Best Practice  

recommendations will be discussed in companion documents.

]]]

Working Group Resolution:
We agree that this should be changed and in addition have reveiwed all
references to the companion documents.



The text we have chosen is:



At the time of writing of this document, documents describing mobileOK and
Techniques for implementing the Best Practices are being worked on.

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Received on Thursday, 18 May 2006 16:02:19 UTC