Re: [XBL] XBL 2.0 Abstract

On Thu, 5 Oct 2006 karl@w3.org wrote:
> 
> It is better to not start the [abstract] by "This specification"

Fixed.


> Reading the abstract, It is not clear what XBL 2.0 is about. Mozilla 
> developer site does a better job.

I'm not convinced the Mozilla developer site does a better job, but I have 
attempted to improve the abstract to combine the better parts of both.


Please let me know if the new abstract is not satisfactory:

   http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/xbl2/Overview.html?content-type=text/html


Cheers,
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Received on Thursday, 5 October 2006 22:51:53 UTC