Re: apa-ACTION-2244: Review eo charter at https://w3c.github.io/charter-drafts/eowg-2020.html

I've reviewed the EO charter.

The stated deliverables look good to me, and the timelines seem reasonable.

My only comment is that the charter uses a lot of complex words and 
sentences that make it difficult to read and understand. Charters are 
rarely easy to read, but EO has an opportunity to lead by example and 
demonstrate how to write a charter that is readable and understandable.

Léonie.


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Director @TetraLogical

Received on Thursday, 2 April 2020 08:50:22 UTC