- From: Janina Sajka (janina@rednote.net) <janina@rednote.net>
- Date: Thu, 30 Apr 2020 09:05:52 -0400
- To: Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org>
- Cc: Accessible Platform Architectures Administration <public-apa-admin@w3.org>
Hi, Judy: You're not the first to be confused by the template subject line in APA calls for consensus. It once served as something of a flag, but no longer functions that way. I will adjust the template for future CfC calls. Meanwhile, this CfC is open until midnight (Boston) this coming Tuesday 5 May. Thanks for your opening comments, and please feel free to take the additional comment time to expand on them if you like. Best, Janina Judy Brewer writes: > Hi Janina and APA WG, > > Thanks for the chance to review. Several comments follow. > > I'm unclear what the timeline is, since I'm seeing a 48-hour call in the > subject line, a deadline below of Tuesday May 3 (perhaps Sunday the 3rd, or > Tuesday the 5th?), and I'd heard of a hoped-for publication date of today, > April 30th and see that on the current editors' draft. > > I do have several concerns that I think should be addressed before the > document is published for wide review, as I believe these could create > misunderstandings as to expectations that W3C WAI may be setting with the > broader community unless these are clarified first. Most of these concerns > relate to AGWG's scope of oversight of the COGA TF rather than APA's, but > given my uncertainty on the publication timeline, I wanted to bring these to > APA's attention as well as AGWG's. > > First, it is great to see how far the document has come -- it is clearer > throughout, and from my perspective has extensive amounts of useful > information in an area that is greatly needed. > > Second, it is quite lengthy, and if APA and AGWG support putting this out > for wide review, think that it is worth reading through, even if, with > regard to substance, we may be relying on wide review to provide detailed > feedback on the substance. > > My concerns are primarily with the abstract, and the policy section. > > * The abstract does not appear to adequately represent the scope or > contents of the document, and it gives no indication of how this > document relates to any other W3C WAI accessibility guidance. Unless > the abstracted is clarified and updated, I think we would should > expect confusion around whether this document is a replacement for > part or all of WCAG 2.x ; whether it's an entirely non-matching set > of new requirements that now double the compliance picture for > groups seeking to conform to accessibility requirements; or some > other relationship to WAI's existing accessibility guidance. Any of > these could detract from the progress evident in this document. I > therefore recommend clarifying and updating the abstract, including > explaining the relationship to existing WAI guidance. > * It is unusual to have policy recommendations embedded in a W3C > technical report, and particularly unusual to have those in a > Note-track document. The policy guidance that is suggested in > Appendix C doesn't describe how this guidance relates to any > existing WAI guidance, and I think it needs to before it goes for > wide review so that misunderstandings don't emerge. Nevertheless, > the content of the policy appendix appears useful and relevant, for > instance highlighting how this guidance could be taken up in > policies for emergency services. One possibility would be to move > that section to a separate document; another would be provide more > clarification of the intention of this section, or even adjust the > name and tone of this appendix. (I'm wondering if "Considerations > for uptake in different contexts" would be more accurate heading for > this section.) But I think addressing this issue before publication > would reduce chances of misunderstandings that may be difficult to > walk back. > > Again, addressing these two concerns fall more under the purview of AGWG, > but I think APA should be aware of these if you are each running a CfC ahead > of First Public Working Draft publication. > > Thank you for your consideration, > > - Judy > > On 4/28/2020 3:39 PM, Janina Sajka (janina@rednote.net) wrote: > > Colleagues: > > > > This is a Call for Consensus (CfC) to the Accessible Platform > > Architectures (APA) Working Group proposing a second > > wide review Draft publication of: > > > > Making Content Usable for People With Cognitive and Learning > > Disabilities > > > > https://raw.githack.com/w3c/coga/changes-after-0327/content-usable/index.html > > > > This document has been in development over many years in our (joint) > > Cognitive and Learning Disabilities (COGA) Task Force. We appreciate and > > support their desire for a second wide review round before seeking to > > finalize the document as a W3C Note. > > > > ***Action to Take*** > > > > This CfC is now open for objection, comment, as well as statements of > > support via email. Silence will be interpreted as support, though > > messages of support are certainly welcome. > > > > If you object to this proposed action, or have comments concerning this > > proposal, please respond by replying on list to this message no later > > than 23:59 (Midnight) Boston Time, Tuesday 3 May. > > > > IMPORTANT: If you have concerns or comments you believe should be > > addressed before a public review publication, please note them in your > > response on this thread but also please copy your comments to > > public-coga-comments@w3.org. > > > > NOTE: This Call for Consensus is being conducted in accordance with the > > APA Decision Policy published at: > > > > http://www.w3.org/WAI/APA/decision-policy > > > > As COGA is a joint Task Force of APA and of the Accessible Guidelines > > Working Group (AGWG), a concurrent CfC is in process at AGWG. Members of > > APA who are also members of AGWG are encouraged to be sure to register > > their responses in both groups. > > > > Janina > > > -- > Judy Brewer > Director, Web Accessibility Initiative > at the World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) > 105 Broadway, Room 7-128, MIT/CSAIL > Cambridge MA 02142 USA > www.w3.org/WAI/ > -- Janina Sajka Linux Foundation Fellow Executive Chair, Accessibility Workgroup: http://a11y.org The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures http://www.w3.org/wai/apa
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