- From: Deb Cooley <debcooley1@gmail.com>
- Date: Thu, 2 Oct 2025 06:10:28 -0400
- To: Steven Bingler <bingler@chromium.org>
- Cc: iesg@ietf.org, draft-ietf-httpbis-rfc6265bis@ietf.org, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org, mnot@mnot.net, svan@elvis.ru
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Thanks for the consideration. Deb On Wed, Oct 1, 2025 at 2:17 PM Steven Bingler <bingler@chromium.org> wrote: > Hi Deb, > > Thank you for your review and my apologies for the delay, I had to > take a hiatus. > > > Section 5: (Recognizing that this is from the original RFC) The nested > > numbered lists are difficult to parse. For example Section 5.7, #6 has > 3 sets > > of sub numbered lists that appear to be distinct. If these sub numbered > lists > > are necessary (and when there is merely a #1 without a #2, one might > argue it > > isn't 'necessary') then perhaps characters other than numbers might be > clearer. > > We went back and forth for a bit on different styles but ultimately > settled on keeping the existing bullets. > > > Section 8: I agree with Valery that this section picks and chooses some > > example issues ('more salient issues'). I wonder if it isn't possible > to give > > a 1-2 sentence overview of the general security issues associated with > cookies. > > Something to set the stage, where what follows are examples of issues > that > > have been seen over time (with or without mitigations). Sadly, I do not > have > > proposed text, and indeed, it may not be possible/feasible. > > We weren't able to come up with anything better. Perhaps we could work > in some concrete suggestions but without any we'll be keeping the > existing text. > > > Section 10.1: Most (all?) of the WHATWG documents can be referenced as a > > snapshot to make them immutable. There might be other ways to do this, > but > > this is the one I've seen used. > > Other RFCs, such as rfc9163 and rfc9205, have the referenced anchors > be made permanent within the WHATWG document. > https://whatwg.org/working-mode#anchors > > I've done the same for ours which will keep the links valid. > > Thanks, > - Steven > >
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