- From: Deb Cooley <debcooley1@gmail.com>
- Date: Thu, 2 Oct 2025 06:10:28 -0400
- To: Steven Bingler <bingler@chromium.org>
- Cc: iesg@ietf.org, draft-ietf-httpbis-rfc6265bis@ietf.org, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org, mnot@mnot.net, svan@elvis.ru
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Thanks for the consideration.
Deb
On Wed, Oct 1, 2025 at 2:17 PM Steven Bingler <bingler@chromium.org> wrote:
> Hi Deb,
>
> Thank you for your review and my apologies for the delay, I had to
> take a hiatus.
>
> > Section 5: (Recognizing that this is from the original RFC) The nested
> > numbered lists are difficult to parse. For example Section 5.7, #6 has
> 3 sets
> > of sub numbered lists that appear to be distinct. If these sub numbered
> lists
> > are necessary (and when there is merely a #1 without a #2, one might
> argue it
> > isn't 'necessary') then perhaps characters other than numbers might be
> clearer.
>
> We went back and forth for a bit on different styles but ultimately
> settled on keeping the existing bullets.
>
> > Section 8: I agree with Valery that this section picks and chooses some
> > example issues ('more salient issues'). I wonder if it isn't possible
> to give
> > a 1-2 sentence overview of the general security issues associated with
> cookies.
> > Something to set the stage, where what follows are examples of issues
> that
> > have been seen over time (with or without mitigations). Sadly, I do not
> have
> > proposed text, and indeed, it may not be possible/feasible.
>
> We weren't able to come up with anything better. Perhaps we could work
> in some concrete suggestions but without any we'll be keeping the
> existing text.
>
> > Section 10.1: Most (all?) of the WHATWG documents can be referenced as a
> > snapshot to make them immutable. There might be other ways to do this,
> but
> > this is the one I've seen used.
>
> Other RFCs, such as rfc9163 and rfc9205, have the referenced anchors
> be made permanent within the WHATWG document.
> https://whatwg.org/working-mode#anchors
>
> I've done the same for ours which will keep the links valid.
>
> Thanks,
> - Steven
>
>
Received on Friday, 3 October 2025 07:23:11 UTC