- From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
- Date: Tue, 11 Jan 2022 10:48:14 -0800
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Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-01 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2022-01-11 IETF LC End Date: 2022-01-19 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 0 Nits/editorial comments: 1 In Section 3, last paragraph: s/If a server which advertises/If a server that advertises/ (Reason: Restrictive clauses should use "that" [1]). [1] https://www.dictionary.com/e/that-vs-which/ Thanks, - vijay
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