Thanks Rob, On Mon, Jun 13, 2022, at 22:43, Robert Wilton via Datatracker wrote: > 1. This references 5 distinct parts, then has a list of 7 items. Yeah, that's a problem. Not least because HTTP lists 4 items... > 2. I'm not convinced that the list follows the section sentence, and perhaps > could be better introduced in a new sentence. I agree. Here's my tweak: +{{Section 6 of HTTP}} defines the general structure of HTTP messages and +composes those messages into distinct parts. This format describes how those +parts are composed into a sequence of bytes. At a high level, binary messages +are comprised of: > 3. Everything in the list starts > with what it is, except for item 2, which is then inconsistently structured > relative to item 3. I'm inclined to leave some awkwardness here, as it is an accurate reflection of the underlying awkwardness :) Still, it can be improved. Perhaps: +2. For a response, zero or more informational responses. Each informational + response consists of an informational status code and header section. Pull request at: https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2160Received on Tuesday, 14 June 2022 00:15:39 UTC
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