Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-binary-message-05: (with COMMENT)

Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-httpbis-binary-message-05: No Objection

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# AD Review for draft-ietf-httpbis-binary-message-05

Thanks for a well-written document. My comments are below.

Running ietf-comments locally doesn't seem to correct parse my markdown nit
comment ...

## Discuss

## Comments

## Nits

### Structure of section 3

A few related mostly nits that I've grouped in a single comment related to this

>  Section 6 of [HTTP] defines five distinct parts to HTTP messages.  A
>  framing indicator is added to signal how these parts are composed:

1. This references 5 distinct parts, then has a list of 7 items.
2. I'm not convinced that the list follows the section sentence, and perhaps
could be better introduced in a new sentence. 3. Everything in the list starts
with what it is, except for item 2, which is then inconsistently structured
relative to item 3.

Received on Monday, 13 June 2022 12:43:28 UTC