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Re: Working Group Last Call: HTTP/2 revision

From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
Date: Fri, 27 Aug 2021 18:37:41 +0200
To: ietf-http-wg@w3.org
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Am 23.07.2021 um 02:05 schrieb Mark Nottingham:
> ...

A few more nits:


Abstract

"HTTP/2 enables a more efficient use of network resources and a reduced
perception of latency by introducing field compression..."

Maybe drop "perception of"...?

1.

First occurance of TCP should have the bibl. reference.


4.1

s/and semantics of the frame./and semantics of the frame payload/?

5.

"The order in which frames are sent on a stream is significant"

That makes it sound like only the order *within* a stream is
significant, and that would be incorrect, right?


5.1

Maybe move legend out of artwork.

Best regards, Julian

PS: I'll be happy to create PRs if desired.
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