Re: Working Group Last Call: HTTP/2 revision

Am 23.07.2021 um 02:05 schrieb Mark Nottingham:
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A few more nits:


"HTTP/2 enables a more efficient use of network resources and a reduced
perception of latency by introducing field compression..."

Maybe drop "perception of"...?


First occurance of TCP should have the bibl. reference.


s/and semantics of the frame./and semantics of the frame payload/?


"The order in which frames are sent on a stream is significant"

That makes it sound like only the order *within* a stream is
significant, and that would be incorrect, right?


Maybe move legend out of artwork.

Best regards, Julian

PS: I'll be happy to create PRs if desired.

Received on Friday, 27 August 2021 16:37:57 UTC