- From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
- Date: Thu, 26 Aug 2021 17:06:46 +1000
- To: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
- Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>, Tommy Pauly <tpauly@apple.com>, Piotr Sikora <piotrsikora@google.com>
> On 26 Aug 2021, at 4:23 pm, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com> wrote: > >> -- Section 2 -- >> I am puzzled by the wording " The requirements in this document" in this BCP... >> Should it rather be "The applicability of this document..." ? > > That would result in a construction like 'the applicability of this document is scoped to applications' which is a bit odd. > > EV> "applicability" will not fly but I still think that "the requirements in this documents" does not fit a BCP. What about a last try "The recommendations in this document apply when..." ? Excellent. See <https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/commit/edd7ac7f1>. >> The following bullet list is unclear whether it is a "OR" or a "AND". > > Each entry (excepting the last) explicitly contains the word 'or'. > > EV> indeed... it looks like that I may need new glasses ... I am familiar with that feeling... Cheers, -- Mark Nottingham https://www.mnot.net/
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