- From: Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
- Date: Wed, 04 Aug 2021 03:01:50 -0700
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- Cc: draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-header@ietf.org, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org, tpauly@apple.com, tpauly@apple.com
Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-header-09: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-header/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for the work put into this document. Special thanks to Tommy Pauly for his shepherd's write-up, which contains a good summary of the WG consensus and the doc reviews. Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated), and one nit. I hope that this helps to improve the document, Regards, -éric == COMMENTS == -- Abstract -- I am puzzled by the use of "updates it" where the "it" is rather undefined... especially as this document 'codifies' it, hence, this is the first time it is documented so no need to update it. If I am wrong, perhaps good to add a reference to the updated document ? Also wondering about the use of 'codifies' in a standard track document, i.e., I was expected a 'specifies'. But, as a non-English speaker, the subtle differences among the English in different continents probably escape me :-) -- Section 2 -- Out of curiosity, why do all parameters start with "sf-" ? How is the IP address specified ? Should RFC 5952 be referenced ? "The Cache-Status header field is only applicable to responses that have been generated by an origin server." but how can a cache know whether it connected to the 'actual origin' and not another level of CDN ? (possibly a very naive question) -- Section 2.2 -- Should there be a "other" value to catch up any other cases ? == NITS == -- Section 2 -- Just wondering about the capitalized 'List' in 'Its value is a List' when the rest of the section uses lowercase 'list'.
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