Re: Nits and suggestions for draft-kazuho-h2-cache-digest

Done:
  https://github.com/mnot/I-D/commit/b2761011291677b

> On 31 May 2016, at 5:12 PM, Kazuho Oku <kazuhooku@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> 2016-05-31 14:24 GMT+09:00 Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>:
>> 
>>> On 15 May 2016, at 1:43 AM, Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>>> From small to large:
>>> 
>>> Nit:
>>>      2.  If "W" and "V" are equal, continue to the next "V".
>>> 
>>> This should be next "W", I think.
>> 
>> There is no next W...
>> 
>> 
>>> I think that Q would be better encoded as a series of 0 bits followed
>>> by a 1 bit.  The reason I say that is that it is (marginally) easier
>>> to generate the values then by masking in the R value in the right
>>> place in a freshly calloc'd piece of memory.
>> 
>> I'm not fussed; Kazuho?
> 
> I do not mind either way, so it might be better to change it now.
> 
>> 
>>> This document really needs to describe what the contents of the cache
>>> digest are, and to describe how to decode the cache digest.  Without
>>> defining what it means to receive and decode this information, this
>>> specification almost says nothing at all.
>> 
>> Whatever happened to "left as an exercise to the reader?"
>> 
>> :)
>> 
>> Yes, we do.
>> 
>> Cheers,
>> 
>> 
>> --
>> Mark Nottingham   https://www.mnot.net/
>> 
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> 
> 
> -- 
> Kazuho Oku

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