- From: Martin J. Dürst <duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp>
- Date: Mon, 09 Dec 2013 15:43:25 +0900
- To: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
- CC: HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
On 2013/12/05 11:02, Mark Nottingham wrote: > Just to see if it might be helpful, I've started collecting rough user stories for HTTP proxies here: > https://github.com/http2/http2-spec/wiki/Proxy-User-Stories > > Feel free to add to them, elaborate, etc. In general, this looks very good! But please remove (or reword) the parenthetical in "Henrietta runs an educational institution inside a house of incarceration (since they share so many attributes)." While some may not have the best memories of school, I don't think it's appropriate to compare prisons and schools in this way. What about some text along these lines: (The example uses both education and incarceration because both kinds of institutions may have somewhat similar requirements on proxies, for different reasons.) Regards, Martin.
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