Fwd: [httpbis] #524: Gen-ART Last Call review draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-25


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Subject: [httpbis] #524: Gen-ART Last Call review 
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Date: Tue, 03 Dec 2013 16:52:51 -0000
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#524: Gen-ART Last Call review draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-25
  Reporter:               |      Owner:  draft-ietf-
   julian.reschke@gmx.de  |  httpbis-p6-cache@tools.ietf.org
      Type:  design       |     Status:  new
  Priority:  normal       |  Milestone:  unassigned
Component:  p6-cache     |   Severity:  In WG Last Call
  Keywords:               |     Origin:  http://www.ietf.org/mail-
                          |  archive/web/gen-art/current/msg09377.html
  Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-25

  Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

  Review Date: 2013-11-18/2013-12-02

  IETF LC End Date: End of November (special deadline)

  IESG Telechat date: 2013-12-19


  This draft is almost ready to be published as Proposed Standard but I have
  some comments.

  Major issues:


  Minor issues:


  Nits/editorial comments:

  Part 6 of:

  draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging (82 pages)

  draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics (98 pages)

  draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional (27 pages)

  draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range (24 pages)

  *draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache (41 pages)

  draft-ietf-httpbis-p7-auth (18 pages)

  draft-ietf-httpbis-method-registrations (7 pages)

  draft-ietf-httpbis-authscheme-registrations (5 pages)

  -As mentioned in p4 review, was it considered merging p4 and p6?

  -[Page 1], abstract, Suggestion to change the sentence to remove the word
  "requirements" to avoid confusion with a Requirements RFC (which is
  usually followed by the spec).

  "This document defines requirements on HTTP caches... "

  -[Page 12], last paragraph, suggestion to use SHOULD  or MUST

  "heuristics can only be used on responses without explicit

  "heuristics SHOULD/MUST only be used on responses without explicit

  -[Page 19], "update the stored response a described below;"--
  typo-->"update the stored response as described below;

  -[Page 22], does is matter if it is strong versus weak validation?

  "  no-cache

     The "no-cache" request directive indicates that a cache MUST NOT use

     a stored response to satisfy the request without successful

     validation on the origin server.


  -[Page 34], Security section, as mentioned in my other reviews, would it
  be better to have a separate draft to discuss all security issues related
  to HTTP?

  Best Regards,


Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/524>
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Received on Tuesday, 3 December 2013 20:31:27 UTC