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Re: #495 WGLC: p4 editorial nits

From: Ken Murchison <murch@andrew.cmu.edu>
Date: Sat, 14 Sep 2013 12:47:30 -0400
Message-ID: <52349322.3040309@andrew.cmu.edu>
To: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
CC: ietf-http-wg@w3.org
On 09/14/2013 11:50 AM, Julian Reschke wrote:
> On 2013-09-13 15:30, Ken Murchison wrote:
>> On 09/13/2013 09:14 AM, Julian Reschke wrote:
>>> On 2013-09-12 16:22, Ken Murchison wrote:
>>>> Looking over the latest diffs I found a couple of typos:
>>>>
>>>> - Sec 3.4, 1st sent" "earlier or equal to" -> "earlier than or 
>>>> equal to"
>>>>
>>>> - Sec 3.4, para 5, 1st sent: "resource that resource" -> "resource 
>>>> that"
>>>>
>>>> - Sec 3.5, 1st para, 1st sent: "similar the If-Match and
>>>> If-Unmodified-Since fields" -> "similar to the If-Match and
>>>> If-Unmodified-Since header fields"
>>>
>>> <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2379>
>>>
>>
>> Hi Julian,
>>
>> You missed adding "header" in the last change above.
>
> See also <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2388> 
> (above), plus Roy's latest changes in 
> <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2389> and 
> <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2390>.
>
> Best regards, Julian


Looks great.  Thanks!

-- 
Kenneth Murchison
Principal Systems Software Engineer
Carnegie Mellon University
Received on Saturday, 14 September 2013 16:48:00 UTC

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