- From: Ken Murchison <murch@andrew.cmu.edu>
- Date: Tue, 19 Mar 2013 15:56:15 -0400
- To: ietf-http-wg@w3.org
Hi All, Sec 2.6, last para, last sentence: "avoiding" -> "avoided" Sec 3.1.1, para 5: "No whitespace is allowed inside the method, request-target, and protocol version." I think "or" would read better than "and". Sec 4.1.2: The ABNF states that all chunks (including last-chunk) may include chunk-ext, so the last line of the first while() loop should be: read chunk-size, chunk-ext (if any) and CRLF Sec 6.6, second last para: The first sentence is quite long and it took me several reads to parse it correctly. I'd suggest adding a comma to separate the two ways that the server can receive an ack of the close from the client, e.g.: "... until the connection is closed by the client, or the server is reasonably certain ..." Sec A.1.2, last para: "need will need" -> "need" or "will need" Regards, Ken -- Kenneth Murchison Principal Systems Software Engineer Carnegie Mellon University
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