Re: draft-kucherawy-httpbis-summary

On 28 March 2012 06:15, Murray S. Kucherawy <msk@cloudmark.com> wrote:
> How about "IANA actions in this document"?

I think that the concern is that you focus on IANA, when what your
users really care about is what _pieces_ of HTTP can be found in the
part in question.  Maybe something more like:

"[http-p1] describes these components/pieces/bits/things/stuff of HTTP:"

Received on Wednesday, 28 March 2012 04:27:45 UTC