- From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
- Date: Tue, 19 Dec 2006 09:35:31 +0100
- To: "Travis Snoozy (Volt)" <a-travis@microsoft.com>
- CC: "ietf-http-wg@w3.org" <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
Travis Snoozy (Volt) schrieb: > I've collected several typos; instead of sending out one mail for each, I've decided to just lump them all together in one message. Enjoy! > > 1. Section 7.1, page 42: > > Some of this metainformation is <ins>"</ins>OPTIONAL<ins>"</ins>; some might be <ins>"</ins>REQUIRED<ins>"</ins> by portions of this specification. I agree that BCP14 keywords shouldn't appear here. But maybe a better fix would be to lowercase both? > 2. Section 13.13, page 99: > > Even though sometimes such resources ought not <del>to</del><ins>be</ins> cached, or ought to expire quickly, user interface considerations may force service authors to resort to other means of preventing caching (e.g. "once-only" URLs) in order not to suffer the effects of improperly functioning history mechanisms. OK. > 3. Section 14.18, page 124: > > The field value is an HTTP-date, as described in section 3.3.1; it MUST be sent in <ins>the </ins>RFC 1123 [8]<del>-</del><ins> </ins>date format. (see separate mail) > 4. Section 14.23, page 129: > > A client MUST include a Host header field in all HTTP/1.1 request messages<del> </del>. OK. > 5. Section 14.32, page 137: > > Note: because the meaning of "Pragma: no-cache<ins>"</ins> as a response<del> </del><ins>-</ins>header field is not actually specified, it does not provide a reliable replacement for "Cache-Control: no-cache" in a response<ins>.</ins> Possibly. There are other instances of that. Should we make them all consistent? > 6. Section 15.6, page 155: > > HTTP/1.1<del>.</del> does not provide a method for a server to direct clients to discard these cached credentials. Yes. Thanks for the good feedback! I will fix the trivial ones right away. Best regards, Julian
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