NEW ISSUE: editorial bug in 13.5.1

Hi,

I was looking at RFC2616, Section 13.5.1 which currently ends with 
(<http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616#section-13.5.1>):

    Other hop-by-hop headers MUST be listed in a Connection header,
    (section 14.10) to be introduced into HTTP/1.1 (or later).

Sorry?

My first idea was that the comma was just in the wrong place, making it

    Other hop-by-hop headers MUST be listed in a Connection header
    (section 14.10), to be introduced into HTTP/1.1 (or later).

But of course that still doesn't make any sense.

So I looked at RFC2068, Section 13.5.1 
(<http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2068#section-13.5.1>) and that one says:

    Hop-by-hop headers introduced in future versions of HTTP MUST be
    listed in a Connection header, as described in section 14.10.

Now that makes sense, and it seems that RFC2616 was broken when somebody 
tried to rewrite that sentence.

Proposal: just say...:

    Other hop-by-hop headers MUST be listed in a Connection header
    (Section 14.10).


Best regards, Julian