v11-03 COMMENT: 16.1 Semantic Transparency

Can we eliminate the double negatives in the first bullet list?
Proposed new wording:

... the protocol requires that transparency may be relaxed only if

+ there is an explicit protocol-level request (when relaxed by client or
	origin server)
+ there is a way to warn the end user (when relaxed by cache or client)


Dave Kristol

Received on Monday, 13 May 1996 09:21:14 UTC