Message-Id: <200007241733.NAA18192@tux.w3.org> Date: Mon, 24 Jul 2000 13:31:52 -0400 To: ietf-dav-versioning@w3.org From: karasiuk@ca.ibm.com (by way of "Ralph R. Swick" <swick@w3.org>) Subject: Comments/Questions on draft-ietf-deltav-versioning-06 [caught in spam filter -rrs] Date: Mon, 24 Jul 2000 13:11:34 -0400 (EDT) From: karasiuk@ca.ibm.com To: ietf-dav-versioning@w3.org Message-ID: <87256926.005DF25B.00@d53mta05h.boulder.ibm.com> Here are some questions that would help a new person (like me) out: 3.4.1 - The sentence "This property contains the revision URL for this revision" is quite confusing. It sounds like it is just pointing back to itself? Could this please be expanded. If it is some internal url, then perhaps it needs a different name, because in other parts of the draft (e.g. 3.3.1) you talk about the "revision URL" and so then it not clear what you mean (do you mean this property or this element?) 3.5.1 - Why is there the indirection for the checked-out property. Why not just <!ELEMENT checked-out (href)> ? 5.3 - The whole topic of selection is confusing. What if you don't specify a target selector, what do you get? Which of the other operations update the default target? (checkin? checkout?). And if you say the default is the "latest", then what percisely do you mean by the latest? the revision with the highest timestamp? 6.2 - It would be useful to add a sentence that explains that check out doesn't actually return the contents/body of the checked out thing (because most other source control systems do return the body on checkout). Gary Karasiuk karasiuk@ca.ibm.com