To: ietf-dav-versioning@w3.org cc: reuterj@ira.uka.de, jjh@ira.uka.de Date: Sat, 20 May 2000 18:09:32 +0200 From: Juergen Reuter <reuterj@ira.uka.de> Message-ID: <"iraun1.ira.0076801:000520.160946"@ira.uka.de> Subject: Re: draft-ietf-deltav04.5 now available Geoffrey wrote: > Table of Contents > ----------------- > > Many headlines end with a period where it probably should not occur > (at least, the "." do not occur consistently). > I didn't see any headlines that end with a period. I assume you are > not referring to the "..." in the table of contents? I am referring to: http://www.webdav.org/deltav/protocol/draft-ietf-deltav-versioning-04.5.htm This contains single and double "." at the end of some, but not all headlines, e.g.: > 7 Advanced Versioning.. 20 > > 7.1 Advanced Versioning Terms 20 > > 8 Advanced Versioning Semantics. 21 > > 8.1 Target Selection and Workspaces. 21 > > 8.2 Baselines 22 > > 8.3 Parallel Development and Merging. 22 > > 8.4 Activities. 22 > > 8.5 Versioned Collections. 23 Note that the indention is also broken. From a short look at the html code (arrgh! sgml/html was originally designed to be human-readable!) I guess your software has some problems with converting the original document into html. In fact, the resulting html is buggy: in section 2.1, it produces a "<big>...</big>" tag that is visible to the user: > <span > > class=HTMLMarkup><span style='color:red'><big></span></span><span > > style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>The revision that was checked out is the > predecessor of the new revision.<span class=HTMLMarkup><span style='color:red'></big></span></span></p> Btw, the diagrams in sections 1.2 and 2.1 do not show properly (there probably should be a "<pre>...</pre>" tag surrounding the diagrams). > What about the > redirection resources protocol which was mentioned in early versions > of this protocol? It seems to have disappeared. > > Hmmm. I'm not sure what this is referring to. Do you have a particular > protocol draft version you can point me at? (I of course keep the protocol > drafts under version control :-). For example, draft-ietf-deltav-versioning-04.txt mentions it in the open issues section. I thought I once even read it somewhere in the introduction, but I can not find it anymore; maybe I was wrong. > > Predecessor, Successor > > ... > > Ancestor and descendant are defined in terms of predecessor and > successor. Bearing object inheritence in mind, it would be nice to > notice that a predecessor can be viewed as an immediate ancestor and a > successor as an immediate descendent. > > That would require us to introduce a term like "immediate", which I > think should be avoided if we already have terms (i.e. predecessor and > successor) that capture that concept. I was just thinking of an informal note to the reader rather than formally defining something new. > What is the difference between a "protected" property and a > "read-only" property? Yes, I know, a "protected" property may change > e.g. as a side effect of a CHECKIN, but not via a PROPPATCH. > > Yes, that is why I decided to not use the term "read-only". > > Section 4.1 of [WebDAV] says: > > > Live properties include cases where a) the value of a property is > > read-only, maintained by the server, and b) the value of the > > property is maintained by the client, but the server performs syntax > > checking on submitted values. > > So, a read-only property may also change. Hence I do not see any > difference between "protected" and "read-only". > > Yes, but a protected property can be changed by the client, just not > with a PROPPATCH. I'm concerned that people will interpret "readonly" > as "only can be changed by the server". Yes, but your argumentation is also applicable on WebDAV's "read-only" properties. Hence, the term "read-only" seems to be flaw of WebDAV; it should be renamed, and deltav should use the new term. So, I would like to vote for renaming WebDAV's "read-only" into "protected". Should this be put onto WebDAV's issues list? > > ... all revision properties except ... are immutable. > > "immutable" should be defined somewhere and compared with "read-only" > and "protected". "immutable" implies "protected", but not vice-versa, > right? "immutable" implies "read-only", but not vice-versa, right? > > Immutable is not being used in a technical sense ... it just means > "cannot be changed". Protected properties can be changed, but not > with PROPPATCH. I think it does not get clear that immutable is not being used in a technical sense; for me, it sounded as if "immutable" were a synonym for "read-only", which it is definitely not. But, once again, this is probably a flaw of WebDAV rather than DeltaV. > It should be mentioned that all versioning headers obey the message > header format as specified in section 4.2 of [HTTP/1.1]. Otherwise, > the field-name, for example, does not need to be a token, but could be > regarded as a literal string. But that would mean that there is no > implied LWS between the field-name and the ":" (just as, for example, > there is no implied LWS in the HTTP-Version production in section 3.1 > of [HTTP/1.1]). Section 4.2 of [HTTP/1.1] also explicitly allows LWS > between the ":" and the field-value. > > I would like to propose the following introduction in section 4: "This > section defines some header fields additional to those defined in > [WebDAV] and [HTTP/1.1]. They follow the format and conventions > defined in section 4.2 of [HTTP/1.1]." > > I think it is better to just put the LWS explicitly in these productions. > So I'll just add LWS? after the ":" and add LWS before the id. HTTP/1.1 talks about "any amount of LWS" before the field value; hence *LWS should be fine. Similarly, it is implied *LWS. > ... > Ok, but what happens, for example, when you try to DELETE a stable > URL? Does that mean that the associated revision is to be deleted? > ... > The same questions arise when you apply DELETE or > MOVE on a versioned resource whose target is a revision. > > No, in that case, the paragraph you quoted applies, and the DELETE or > MOVE is applied to the binding to that versioned resource, not to the > revision. But, once again, given a server that does *not* support the bindings protocol, what happens, when you try to DELETE a versioned resource whose target is a revision? Delete the revision? Delete the versioned resource? Return an error? > When you say it is a misunderstanding, did you mean that it wasn't > clear what was being said, or that you thought it meant something > else? I think it is the wording "target of a versioned resource" itself that was confusing me. Ok, the definition in section 1.2 explicitly says that the target is controlled with the Target-Header-Selector. Still, I personally would prefer a term like "target of a request to a versioned resource" or "request target of a versioned resource". Bye, Juergen