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Issue 504 is closed

From: Yves Lafon <ylafon@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 17 Sep 2004 14:38:28 +0200 (MEST)
To: I18n WSTF <public-i18n-ws@w3.org>
cc: xmlp-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <Pine.GSO.4.61.0409171356370.18508@gnenaghyn.vaevn.se>
On Thu, 2 Sep 2004, A. Vine wrote:

[issue 504 covers the "Basic edits" section of your email.]

Everything has been corrected in the latest editor's draft [1]. It was not 
possible to locate everything as you commented on a version that is not 
the CR version [2].
Can you verify the latest editor's copy [1]?
Thanks,

[1] http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/3/06/Attachments/Representation.html
[2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/CR-soap12-rep-20040826/

> Below are some basic edits:
>
> 2.1 Introduction
> ----------------
>
> occurences => occurrences (2 places)
> several representation => several representations
>
>
> 2.2.1 rep:Representation element
> --------------------------------
>
> "One or more attribute information items amongst its [attributes]
> property as follows:"
> =>
> "One or more attribute information items amongst its [attributes]
> properties as follows:"
> (not clear as written, is it an "attributes property"?  If so, it can't
> be "amongst" a single thing.  Same comment for section 2.2.4)
>
> "One or more element information items in its [children] property in
> order as follows:"
> =>
> "One or more element information items in its [children] properties in
> order as follows:"
> (not clear as written, is it a "children property"?)
>
> "with a [namespace name] different than"
> =>
> "with a [namespace name] different from"
>
>
> 2.2.4 rep:Data element
> ----------------------
> (Same comments as in 2.2.1)
>
>
> 2.3 Extensibility of the Representation header block
> ----------------------------------------------------
> "several possible usage" => "several possible usages"
>
>
> 2.3.3 HTTP headers
> ------------------
> "... all SOAP senders understand HTTP caching mechanism"
>                                ^the
>
>
> Regards,
> Andrea Vine
> W3C I18n WSTF
>

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