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Re: Issue 504 is closed

From: A. Vine <andrea.vine@Sun.COM>
Date: Tue, 28 Sep 2004 18:48:57 -0700
To: Yves Lafon <ylafon@w3.org>
Cc: I18n WSTF <public-i18n-ws@w3.org>, xmlp-comments@w3.org
Message-id: <415A1489.3080606@sun.com>

Dear Yves and the XMLPWG,
I apologize but am unable to thoroughly review the CR version of the 
Resource Representation SOAP Header Block specification.  However, in a 
quick glance I noticed that:

occurences => occurrences (2 places)

is still not fixed.
Regards,
Andrea Vine
Sun Microsystems

Yves Lafon wrote:

> On Thu, 2 Sep 2004, A. Vine wrote:
> 
> [issue 504 covers the "Basic edits" section of your email.]
> 
> Everything has been corrected in the latest editor's draft [1]. It was 
> not possible to locate everything as you commented on a version that is 
> not the CR version [2].
> Can you verify the latest editor's copy [1]?
> Thanks,
> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/3/06/Attachments/Representation.html
> [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/CR-soap12-rep-20040826/
> 
>> Below are some basic edits:
>>
>> 2.1 Introduction
>> ----------------
>>
>> occurences => occurrences (2 places)
>> several representation => several representations
>>
>>
>> 2.2.1 rep:Representation element
>> --------------------------------
>>
>> "One or more attribute information items amongst its [attributes]
>> property as follows:"
>> =>
>> "One or more attribute information items amongst its [attributes]
>> properties as follows:"
>> (not clear as written, is it an "attributes property"?  If so, it can't
>> be "amongst" a single thing.  Same comment for section 2.2.4)
>>
>> "One or more element information items in its [children] property in
>> order as follows:"
>> =>
>> "One or more element information items in its [children] properties in
>> order as follows:"
>> (not clear as written, is it a "children property"?)
>>
>> "with a [namespace name] different than"
>> =>
>> "with a [namespace name] different from"
>>
>>
>> 2.2.4 rep:Data element
>> ----------------------
>> (Same comments as in 2.2.1)
>>
>>
>> 2.3 Extensibility of the Representation header block
>> ----------------------------------------------------
>> "several possible usage" => "several possible usages"
>>
>>
>> 2.3.3 HTTP headers
>> ------------------
>> "... all SOAP senders understand HTTP caching mechanism"
>>                                ^the
>>
>>
>> Regards,
>> Andrea Vine
>> W3C I18n WSTF
>>
> 

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