XML schema draft comments: pt.1 2.3 editorial - commas

Regarding the draft at
http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/:


Section 2.3 says:

   The preceding section focused on ·validation·, that is the
   constraints on ....

which should be punctuated as:

   The preceding section focused on ·validation·, that is, the
   constraints on ...

It also says:

   In fact however this specification provides four different kinds
   of normative statements ...

which probably should begin:

   In fact, however, this specification provides ...



Section 3.1.1 also says:

   Components are defined in terms of their properties, and each
   property in turn is defined by giving its range, that is the
   values it may have.

which should have a comma after "that is."



Daniel







Daniel