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XML schema draft comments: pt.1 2.3 editorial - commas

From: Daniel Barclay <daniel@fgm.com>
Date: Tue, 15 Jun 2004 15:05:35 -0400
Message-ID: <40CF487F.1060902@fgm.com>
To: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org

Regarding the draft at
http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/:


Section 2.3 says:

   The preceding section focused on ·validation·, that is the
   constraints on ....

which should be punctuated as:

   The preceding section focused on ·validation·, that is, the
   constraints on ...

It also says:

   In fact however this specification provides four different kinds
   of normative statements ...

which probably should begin:

   In fact, however, this specification provides ...



Section 3.1.1 also says:

   Components are defined in terms of their properties, and each
   property in turn is defined by giving its range, that is the
   values it may have.

which should have a comma after "that is."



Daniel







Daniel
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