- From: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
- Date: Fri, 25 Feb 2000 22:34:26 -0800
- To: www-xml-linking-comments@w3.org
- Cc: w3t-comm@w3.org
Based on one reading, here are four quick comments on your XBase last
call Working Draft [1] "work in progress."
2. par. 2
"...This enables scoping behavior consistent with the
xml:lang and xml:space attributes."
could give those attributes' source the first time they are
mentioned. For example:
This enables scoping behavior consistent with the xml:lang and
xml:space attributes (defined in [XML] sections 2.12 and 2.10).
2. par. 3 and Appendix A list item 2
"XML Namespaces" could be the title "Namespaces in XML" or read "XML
namespaces" (no cap).
2. example following par. 4, and the list that follows
"http://somewhere.org" could read "http://example.org". IANA
registered example.com, example.net, and example.org for just this
kind of use. (See RFC 2606 also known as BCP 32 at
http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2606.txt.)
Appendix A - list items 1 and 2
The plain instances of xml:base could read <code>xml:base</code> to
match the others.
Reference:
[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/WD-xmlbase-20000221
Best wishes,
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Susan Lesch
susan@textet.com
Received on Saturday, 26 February 2000 01:34:38 UTC