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RE: Comments on Primer

From: Liu, Kevin <kevin.liu@sap.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Jan 2005 20:06:27 +0100
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To: "Arthur Ryman" <ryman@ca.ibm.com>, <www-ws-desc@w3.org>
Arthur,
 
Thank you very much for the comments.  I will make the changes
accordingly.

Best Regards,
Kevin
  

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Sent: Monday, Jan 24, 2005 05:39 AM
To: www-ws-desc@w3.org
Subject: Comments on Primer



David and Kevin, 

The Primer is looking good. 

I noticed a few small errors: 

1. In 2.3.1, the description of the targetNamespace attributes should
say ".... checkAvailability and checkAvailabilityResponse ..." 

2. In 7.16.3 you should replace  http://tempuri.org by
http://example.org since that is specified by an RFC. 

3. Throughout, replace Qname by QName. 

Arthur Ryman,
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