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Comments on Primer

From: Arthur Ryman <ryman@ca.ibm.com>
Date: Mon, 24 Jan 2005 08:38:50 -0500
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David and Kevin,

The Primer is looking good. 

I noticed a few small errors:

1. In 2.3.1, the description of the targetNamespace attributes should say 
".... checkAvailability and checkAvailabilityResponse ..."

2. In 7.16.3 you should replace  http://tempuri.org by http://example.org 
since that is specified by an RFC.

3. Throughout, replace Qname by QName.

Arthur Ryman,
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