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Re: Comments on Primer

From: David Booth <dbooth@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 26 Jan 2005 15:00:33 -0500
To: Arthur Ryman <ryman@ca.ibm.com>
Cc: www-ws-desc@w3.org
Message-Id: <1106769632.16538.1836.camel@nc6000.w3.org>

Done.  Thanks Arthur!


On Mon, 2005-01-24 at 08:38, Arthur Ryman wrote:
> David and Kevin,
> 
> The Primer is looking good. 
> 
> I noticed a few small errors:
> 
> 1. In 2.3.1, the description of the targetNamespace attributes should
> say ".... checkAvailability and checkAvailabilityResponse ..."
> 
> 2. In 7.16.3 you should replace  http://tempuri.org by
> http://example.org since that is specified by an RFC.
> 
> 3. Throughout, replace Qname by QName.
> 
> Arthur Ryman,
> Rational Desktop Tools Development
> 
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David Booth
W3C Fellow / Hewlett-Packard
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