Re: Draft of TAG Submission to W3C Workshop on Web of Services for Enterprise Computing

> Good stuff.

Thanks.  Given the limited time available, positive reviews are 
particularly welcome!

> Also, "Suggested Reading" connotes "you should read this". Perhaps
> tone it down to "References" or "Related Works" or something,
> as in "FYI".

Sure, no problem.  "Suggesed" seems pretty mild to me, but "References" is 
just fine too.  I'll make the change before submitting.

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Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
01/09/2007 11:58 AM
 
        To:     noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com
        cc:     www-tag@w3.org
        Subject:        Re: Draft of TAG Submission to W3C Workshop on Web 
of Services for Enterprise  Computing


On Thu, 2007-01-04 at 11:13 -0500, noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com wrote:
[...]
> I invite review of this document from the community, but especially from 

> the TAG, because it is intended to capture our position.

Good stuff.

After reading the 1st use case, I wondered what happened to WADL
and such, but I see it comes in later.

Also, "Suggested Reading" connotes "you should read this". Perhaps
tone it down to "References" or "Related Works" or something,
as in "FYI".

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